Revision Strategy:
For my final draft, I would say my major goal is to work on my thesis and make it more specific to the direction that my paper is going. There are also a few things I need to fine tune throughout the essay, including adding the multimodal aspect, but I would say those are my two main goals for the final draft. What I first plan to do will be looking at my claim sentences and paragraphs, and see what my main themes in the paper seem to be. Then I will adjust my thesis statement from there. I then plan to go back into each paragraph and make sure that all my claims and paragraphs circle back to my thesis statement. There are also a few things I need to add into the essay which was some feedback I received from the peer review session. My biggest challenge will probably be editing my thesis which has always been challenging for me. It can be difficult to find a specific angle while also making the statement powerful and impactful. If this challenge becomes too difficult for me, I will make sure to reach out for help from either Mary-Katherine Spain or Professor Emerson because I really appreciate both of their feedback and help on the essays.
Woohoo. Sounds like a plan. You are on the right track to writing a strong paper!